作者大大的文好，
但题目不好，不能吸引人的注意力
这篇文文是我无意中翻到的，
如果换个题目可能会有vip的资本吧
向洋洋的《顺手牵个“宝宝”来》原名叫《偷仙》
《偷仙》没什么名气，一改名就火了
所以我建议作者大大换一下题目
还有我希望《粉盒奇缘》不要是玄月得封笔作
我会一直支持你的文的
加油！加油！
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说一下剧情~
```````````````````````````````````````````````````````文笔不错，文中的素顺我很喜欢，复杂的气质，为女猪保留的那一份纯真
1期待他长大的样子
2期待有陆续男猪角出现
3期待更新的速度
4期待玄月的下篇喜剧np文
5期待玄月文文有自己的回报
6期待大家都能看到着篇文文
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失恋没什么大不了的，男人靠得住母猪会上树
所以不要伤心了，让它过去吧！
活出自己的精彩！
（小鱼儿给我的长评，我蛮喜欢的。放在这儿做个纪念。）